Carpe Diem Tan Renga – Wabi’s sunrise

In Carpe Diem Tan Renga we complete a haiku with a completion to make it a 5 line tanka. The haiku this week is by Fellow Carpe Diem haijin Wabi Sabi

The haiku is:
at sunrise –
no words between lovers
just a kiss

This is my complete poem:


at sunrise –
no words between lovers
just a kiss

lips recalls the softness
in her parchment skin



September 8, 2013

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