A sad dog – Trifextra


Alone, in tether bound
forgotten upon loft
a crown among the hounds
his fur is sleek and soft
now eyes speak sorrows
moans, laments the loss
of gone tomorrows
and his dying boss

High Life by Edwin Henry Landseer

High Life by Edwin Henry Landseer


Trifextra this weekend is to write 30 word story plus the words tether, loft, crown.

September 6, 2013

42 responses to “A sad dog – Trifextra

  1. I actually laughed at the end of this. The “dying boss” bit gave me a fit of the giggles. I know, I need to get out more!

  2. you want to take that puppy in your arms and stroke his coat.

    (now I wish that my dog thought I was the boss….although he did take good care of me on pregnancy bed rest…he was loyal and true)

    such a sad but telling tale Bjorn. 🙂

  3. I saw a movie recently on Hallmark about a dog that faithfully awaited its master outside of class at a college. In the story the owner died and the dog remained at his usual spot awaiting his master. Loyalty of a dog knows no bounds. I like this so much.

  4. I love the dog-cat you and pc did….i loved this although how terribly sad it made me…i often worry about my dog regarding my death.

  5. First of all, you are a fabulous poet and it makes me very envious. Secondly, this was beautifully sad and my heart aches for him.

  6. So, so sad. Reminds me of a movie I saw some years ago, starring Richard Gere as a man witha loyal dog/ friend. Each day his dog walked him to the train station and met him at the end of each day. One day the man died at work. For many years, through all kinds of weather, his dog waited for him to return. I’ll send you the name of the film.
    Beautiful writing, Bjorn.

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