22 responses to “my amber eyes – triolet for trifecta”

1. Really your poetry is rich, velvety and deep in feeling.

2. I love triolets ! yours here is such a beauty .. so vintage 🙂

3. Intensely beautiful & strikes a chord in my romantic heart!Now,I will have to go look up what is a triolet though I can guess a bit 😛 See,as I told you,have still to learn so much Bjorn:-)

4. Such a lovely triolet! Nicely done!

5. That’s a new form for me; nicely done!

6. I like this very much. I like the way the three lines that are not repeated contrast in meaning so much to the ones that do repeat.

7. I really like this, Bjorn – so very loving; and I DO share your love of the triolet form.

8. Beautiful poem! I have never heard of a triolet, so I had to look it up.

9. Dang, Bjorn, this has so much character to it for such a short piece. “moonlight drinking blood of dove” – that line just gives the whole thing a different color. Great job!

10. Ah, lovely. You are a master at these.

11. Rich,surplus with love! Beautiful entry.

12. Simple in words yet complex in intertwining meaning, this is really intriguing! Thanks for introducing to me the triolet, too!

13. I had not heard of triolet. This is beautiful. You certainly have a way with words. 🙂

    P.S. Thanks for introducing me to a new poetry form! I think triolet would be a great trifextra challenge.

    • Me too. A great challenge 🙂

14. Gorgeous! I love those amber eyes!

15. This is pretty.

16. This is almost Shakespearean. It would definitely not be out of place on a stage.
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17. Very nice piece!

18. Nice one, Björn, especially those enchanting amber eyes!

19. I felt completely pulled back in time. Truly magical!

20. So beautiful….there is always so much feeling in everything you write.

21. I love your poetry and the fact that you introduce me to new forms! This is hauntingly beautiful.

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