16 responses to “Carpe Diem Haiku – Shinryoo (new coolness)”

1. perfect association of apples and cheek

   • Thank you 🙂

2. An apple and cheek, both come a blushing should you peek

3. I like this one a lot! Well done.

4. Nice metaphor for the crispness of autumn!

5. Oh! Yes!

6. Lovely haiku!

7. i thought i could
   steal a kiss but now my cheek
   is also red

   Cheers!
   JzB

8. Excellent Bjorn, well done sir!

   New Coolness

9. That combination of autumn apples ( in words) and rosy cheeks ( picture) is a very innovative haiku indeed.

   Shakti

10. I this, I love the picture and I love autumn! 😀

    • Follow the link and do some real haiku with our Master Kristjaan.. we season words this month.

11. this is lovely

12. Aww,so sweet!Perfect!

13. The rosy red cheeks … like apples … wonderfully done Bjorn. Like that painting in your post.

14. Yes, the autumn coolness that comes blushing cheeks 🙂

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