Once again we are doing traditional season words in Carpe Diem. I tried once again to do a one-line haiku.
autumn comes with golden kisses of the aspen leaves
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August 31, 2013
Once again we are doing traditional season words in Carpe Diem. I tried once again to do a one-line haiku.
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Bjorn, I liked this haiku a great deal.>KB
Thank you… one line haiku are quite fun to write..
I like this very much. Reminds me of why I love autumn.
Thank you… 🙂
how the sun
says goodbye to the aspen –
golden kisses
I love these kigo words and the haiku they inspire. Love your one-liner!
I love yours to, and yes the kigo prompts are so inspiring
Love golden kisses:)
😉
That’s an awesome One-Line haiku Bjorn … really you have touched autumn with this haiku. “golden kisses of the aspen leaves” is just a gorgeous part of the line.
Excellent, Björn.
Lovely, just love those golden kisses!
Shoving Autumn Back
So very lovely. Ahhhhhh.
A lovely one line haiku 🙂
What a beautiful picture in a few words!
I love the way the aspen shudders…must be those kisses….
autumn
in the cool embrace
of aspen limbs
Cheers!
JzB
Golden kisses are beautiful; you have created a very serene picture in this haiku.
Once again I learn visiting your writing. A one-line haiku is new to me. Lovely.
I have learned from the other’s here at CD…
I love the feel and color conveyed
hmm one line – a new challenge
yes.. I actually write it first as three lines… and then let it flow into one sentence.
oh, love this one line challenge and your haiku flows like the coming of autumn. nice!
WoW ! love this.
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Siggi
And this is beautiful
And you completely succeeded.