25 responses to “Carpe Diem Haiku – Risshuu (coming of autumn)”

1. Bjorn, I liked this haiku a great deal.>KB

   • Thank you… one line haiku are quite fun to write..

2. I like this very much. Reminds me of why I love autumn.

   • Thank you… 🙂

3. how the sun
   says goodbye to the aspen –
   golden kisses

   I love these kigo words and the haiku they inspire. Love your one-liner!

   • I love yours to, and yes the kigo prompts are so inspiring

4. Love golden kisses:)

   • 😉

5. That’s an awesome One-Line haiku Bjorn … really you have touched autumn with this haiku. “golden kisses of the aspen leaves” is just a gorgeous part of the line.

6. Excellent, Björn.

7. Lovely, just love those golden kisses!

   Shoving Autumn Back

8. So very lovely. Ahhhhhh.

9. A lovely one line haiku 🙂

10. What a beautiful picture in a few words!

11. I love the way the aspen shudders…must be those kisses….

12. autumn
    in the cool embrace
    of aspen limbs

    Cheers!
    JzB

13. Golden kisses are beautiful; you have created a very serene picture in this haiku.

14. Once again I learn visiting your writing. A one-line haiku is new to me. Lovely.

    • I have learned from the other’s here at CD…

15. I love the feel and color conveyed
    hmm one line – a new challenge

    • yes.. I actually write it first as three lines… and then let it flow into one sentence.

16. oh, love this one line challenge and your haiku flows like the coming of autumn. nice!

17. WoW ! love this.
    Peace
    Siggi

18. And this is beautiful

19. And you completely succeeded.

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