CD Tan Renga – Southard’s “the swing of the gate”

Carpe Diem Tan Renga is to write a 77 completion to a haiku by Southard

Just the cellarpit;
only the catbird recalls
the swing of the gate

I read quite some sadness into this, and my completed tanka is below.

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Just the cellarpit;
only the catbird recalls
the swing of the gate

desolation left behind
she left a withered garden

August 30, 2013

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