Carpe Diem Tan Renga is to write a 77 completion to a haiku by Southard
Just the cellarpit;
only the catbird recalls
the swing of the gate
I read quite some sadness into this, and my completed tanka is below.

Just the cellarpit;
only the catbird recalls
the swing of the gate
desolation left behind
she left a withered garden
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August 30, 2013
Very nice completion of the haiku. I like the direction you took it!
like the solemn feel you give your renga
the catbird alone knows the garden of the past
Ah,that is sad..but lovely too.
very nice completion
i feel the echo of sadness here. enjoyed your offering.