16 responses to “Carpe Diem Haiku – Longing for the unknown”

1. I like the nautical imagery! Are you a sailor during your free time?

   • not really… I have a kayak to take me… and I think it gives me a sailor’s heart.

2. a very masculine haiku. I know this sounds strange, but these three lines reminded me of my childhood and teenage when I loved reading of sea voyages and sea battles.

   • True… I read a lot of adventure in the prompt..

3. Upon the sea, much can be surely set free

4. YES!

5. beyond horizon
   sailor goes on without fear
   but there be dragons

   Cheers!
   JzB

   • lol…why I wouldn’t go. Those “dragons”, you know…come in all shapes and forms.

6. I could feel the yearning of your soul. You create a wonderful image through your words.

7. Doesn’t every boy (man) yearn to hop aboard a ship and set off for the unknown? This reminded me of so many books I read in my younger days!

8. Room on board for one more?

9. Yearning for the mystery behind the horizon. That’s longing for the unknown.

10. love the metaphorical essence of your haiku ~ sometimes everything you need is right here ~ thanks, carol, xo

11. the voyage just begins past the horizon – nice take on this prompt Bjorn

12. The infinite promise of mystery beyond horizon… Thought-provoking, Björn.

13. A sailor’s heart and soul…

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