fall music, exuberant plays
summer of forest
leaves in dance
turn
you
turn
dance in leaves
forest of summer
plays exuberant music – fall
Forest edge by Wassily Kandinsky
At dVerse Form For All we are doing Fibonacci, Pascal’s triangle or triangle poems. Counting syllable or feet. I decided to do a Palindrome on a syllable Fibonacci. I’ll be leaving US tonight again and will do my best to read all entries.
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August 15, 2013
Björn Rudbergs writings 
That is just soooooooooooo clever Björn
Thank you Tony 🙂 combination of forms are so interesting.
how cool….clever indeed and you managed to capture the dance of the leaves as well… hope your trip is going well…
It’s going well and I try to go up early in the morning…
Wow, I am impressed Not only a Fibonacci but a palindrome as well! Exemplary achievement.
Thank you… 🙂
Bjorn, this was a TRUE palindrome… not simply full lines done in backward order, but all the words within the line. The mind boggles (but I am a boggler, or bogglee, by nature!).
The subject matter is also lush and reminding me that the season is almost upon us… yikes, we just got summer here! Amy
Thank you, summer’s always too short, but somehow dancing in the fallen leaves sounds great to me too. Palindromes are like puzzles, and I find I take that approach when writing poetry.
I’m doing my best to keep hold of summer, and I’m hoping my travels put me back home just as it has started warming. Nice Fibonacci/Palindrome!
ah not only a fib but a palindrome too…very cool…i love the fall…the flop in this is like the season change…your worked it very well bjorn
oh, this is beautiful and tight!
Fantastic work Bjorn ~ Love that you did a palindrome too ~ The bridge -you- is just perfect for fall ~
I am amazed by how good you are in writing a palindrome poem. And now the adjoining Fibonacci with great imagery… great job!
Both clever & accurate; love the thought you put into this, and the result is way cool. August is nearing midway, and September is already growling in the wings of wind.
Very clever! I stand in awe!
You’ve created a new poem form: the YO-YO 🙂
Beautifully mirrored. Smiling.
Oh, Bjorn, you’ve managed a triangle inside a circle, kudos! So beautiful, too.
Wow… very impressive, Bjorn!
Very nice..it seems we both have music on the mind & great job with the double form.
Love the turn in the middle very nicely done!
Most excellent Björn – well done Sir!
Anna :o]
A clever twist to the usual triangular form. A breath of fresh input Bjorn!
Nicely!
Hank
Wow superior! You make the tricky hard look easy. I’m impressed.
Oh my BR how you have excelled with this, I am impressed like the others. Very well done – thank you.
Wow! 🙂
Great palindrome, and what beautiful imagery–nice! 🙂
Love the forest of summer…ah, how easy to breath in your poem…
…fantastic Bjorn… love love love the experimental vibe here you create… i read this as if the motion is coming slowly down like the falling of a leaf awaiting to kiss damp earth… loved it… smiles…
That’s a delight! Clever idea, that back-to-front reversal, not to mention the Palindrome.
Clever reverse palindromic contortion. Enjoy your trip