Carpe Diem Tan Rengu this week is to complete a haiku
after fireworks
the silence is clearer
darkness is deeper
this happens to be a haiku of my own, and I thought I’d do a renku completion. A little coarse and humorous instead..
after fireworks
the silence is clearer
darkness is deeper
but when he starts snoring
she light up a cigarette
June 30,2013
Björn Rudbergs writings 
I am glad that you posted your own second stanza to your own first stanza Bjorn. Tan Renga is meant for two poets but it’s also a great way to learn.
Love it!
lol…you be funny.
Ha! Good one. I love it.
I would do the same if I smoked 🙂
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