29 responses to “Carpe Diem Haiku – Hanabi (Fireworks)”

1. That second one is great!

   • Thank you 🙂

2. Ah yes that deep and clear silence, captured perfectly!Fireworks

   • Thank you

3. Love that second haiku. Indeed deeper silence. You are in US? In this heat?

   • I was in the US during New year – that’s where the pic is taken

4. Big 🙂 ‘s

   • ;-D

5. Wonderful photo … I like that first haiku because of the humor in it, but that second haiku is a masterpiece … Chapeau!

   • Sorry Bjorn … I had a question. Is it OK that I will use this second haiku for our next Tan Renga?

     • But of course, I’d be honored 😉

     • OK then it’s a deal … thank you Bjorn.

6. Yes, the 2nd is magnificent

   JzB

   • JazzBumpa nailed it. The second haiku is indeed magnificent. It draws me in. Way in.

     Cemetery Fireworks

7. That is amazingly true!

   • Thank you 🙂

8. Enhancing
   the darkness & silence
   firework.

   • 😉 great

     • Thank you.

9. Yes your second is so true 🙂

   First Kiss

   • 🙂

10. Spot on on the second one.

11. It seems my comment went into your spam 🙂

    • No .. there was nothing in my spam except real spam

12. Is that so? I was on your blog at 12 midnight my time and I remember commenting. But you know I had a lot of blogs opened and commenting simultaneously when suddenly there was lights off and the computer went off.

    So I’m commenting now: the first one is fun but the second one is powerfully profound, beautiful really

13. Mickey’s lullaby is delightful….the second – beautiful observation of post-explosion moments

14. I would have opted for deeper silence alone as the air keeps the smell for a while. Nevertheless your haiku are good as ever.

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16. Great observations in the second — it really is clearer and darker. 🙂

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