Carpe Diem kigo is Hanabi (Fireworks), I took the picture below when visiting the Magic Kingdom this weekend.
evening fireworks
over Magic Kingdom
goodnight Mickey
after fireworks
the silence is clearer
darkness is deeper
—
June 22, 2013
Carpe Diem kigo is Hanabi (Fireworks), I took the picture below when visiting the Magic Kingdom this weekend.
after fireworks
the silence is clearer
darkness is deeper
—
June 22, 2013
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That second one is great!
Thank you 🙂
Ah yes that deep and clear silence, captured perfectly!Fireworks
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Love that second haiku. Indeed deeper silence. You are in US? In this heat?
I was in the US during New year – that’s where the pic is taken
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Wonderful photo … I like that first haiku because of the humor in it, but that second haiku is a masterpiece … Chapeau!
Sorry Bjorn … I had a question. Is it OK that I will use this second haiku for our next Tan Renga?
But of course, I’d be honored 😉
OK then it’s a deal … thank you Bjorn.
Yes, the 2nd is magnificent
JzB
JazzBumpa nailed it. The second haiku is indeed magnificent. It draws me in. Way in.
Cemetery Fireworks
That is amazingly true!
Thank you 🙂
Enhancing
the darkness & silence
firework.
😉 great
Thank you.
Yes your second is so true 🙂
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Spot on on the second one.
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Is that so? I was on your blog at 12 midnight my time and I remember commenting. But you know I had a lot of blogs opened and commenting simultaneously when suddenly there was lights off and the computer went off.
So I’m commenting now: the first one is fun but the second one is powerfully profound, beautiful really
Mickey’s lullaby is delightful….the second – beautiful observation of post-explosion moments
I would have opted for deeper silence alone as the air keeps the smell for a while. Nevertheless your haiku are good as ever.
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Great observations in the second — it really is clearer and darker. 🙂