Trifecta challenge word is club in 3rd definition.
3a : an association of persons for some common object usually jointly supported and meeting periodically; also : a group identified by some common characteristic
b : the meeting place of a club
c : an association of persons participating in a plan by which they agree to make regular payments or purchases in order to secure some advantage
d : nightclub
e : an athletic association or team
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I thought this time I’d do a rondeau wich is a fixed form of poetry, I welcome any attempt to sing this little song of irony (except my own)
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we’re fabulous, we are the best
adorned with marking on our chest
a brand of excellence for us
the common man we can repress
cause our club excludes the rest
come look at us, the fair noblesse
we’re better bred there is no test
just DNA will make you blessed
we’re fabulous
you say plebeians are oppressed
society has now progressed
why ever should we this discuss?
your simple manners won’t impress
remember this in your protest
we’re fabulous
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June 18, 2013
Björn Rudbergs writings 
ah, the people you love to hate right?
I always wonder what it might be like to be born CONDESCENDING and Exclusive. You learn a behavior, that I am sure of.
but of course, your way of expressing it was brilliant!
um…fabulous?
I find people like this superfluous to my requirements!
Great rondeau!
nicely done. an exclusive look at being exclusionary.
cool take on the prompt!
best,
MOV
Superb superb satire!!
I’d definitely like to hear you sing it Bjorn! …a little video perhaps…?
Claire
Your versatility is a wonder, it’s simply fabulous!
Yeah, plebeians! Great flow here.
yup .. a little artiwiculate inspiration
I love that you use a fixed form of poetry to portray a fixed perspective. It’s so indicative of someone who can’t see outside the lines. That middle stanza in particular was like a needle jabbing. Great satire, here! ~Christine (Trifecta Guest Judge)
Great message. I enjoyed the rondeau form. I’d like to try that some time.
Uniquely, utterly, Björn :)) Satire in its finest attire.
Lovely irony! I didn’t enter this time but had to read yours 🙂
love it!
I love this (: So much fun.
Oh what marvellous condesension! Excellent elegant poetry.
yes, those born risen above it all.
Great rondeau, Björn!
A great take on the prompt. Loved the firs stanza, it said so much about those who think themselves above us mere mortals.
Nice rondeau – suits the subject matter well.
I very thoroughly enjoyed sing-songing this one out loud, and added a huzzah at the end. Poignantly sarcastic, or sardonically satirical…hmmm. Your poem is making me want to frame my comment in a lyrical manner…
🙂 ,,, the form comes from old french dancing so it make sense to sing it.
This was really “fabulous.” This should be a recitation for every club.