Carpe Diem Haiku – threnody

Today the prompt for Carpe Diem is thenody as suggest by Mark Redfern. I had too google threnody, but I found a suitable theme.

Funeral of a first born by Mykola Yaroshenko

Funeral of a first born by Mykola Yaroshenko

after brief visit
baptised to a threnody
their first born child
~~
their first born child
carried to a shallow grave
wind sings threnody
~~
wind sings threnody
barren trees like skeletons
haunt their silent march


April 17, 2013

13 responses to “Carpe Diem Haiku – threnody

  1. wow this hit me on such a personal level that I cried. Beautifully done.

  2. You used your words to perfectly illustrate the bleakness of losing a child! Wind singing threnody and the skeleton trees were especially good!!

  3. baptised to a threnody – gave me chills. reminded me of when i had to perform emergency baptism on a neonate in the icu, i cried then 😦 well done

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