I’m very very late with my VisDare entry this week. This is the forth installment of my vampire story. If you want to catch up here are part1, part2, part3
The master gathers the start of his new clan. By mind control he have ensnared the young couple of the castle, Amanda and Alexander. They stand in awe deep in the cellar of the castle where they once thought they would rule.
“A vampire clan needs to grow, you must leave and gather more minions, you are my most honored deputies”
“YES, YES” they answer in unison.
“I have a tool to help you, a most devious one to ensnare your victims. I will give you servants that can help you”
“Bats?” Amanda asks whimsically. but eagerly.
“Rats?” Alexander says with a little less enthusiasm.
“No” thunders the master
“Those servants they are always on their watch for”
The master picks up a dusty box and opens it.
“I’ll give you….. “
The master pauses dramatically.
“Vampire snails”
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March 10, 2012
Björn Rudbergs writings 
I love the thought of vampire snails.
It looked like small fangs so I had to use that 🙂
LOL!! Not merely leeches only, but vampire snails!! Hahaha! A truly original idea. Great entry!!!
Thank you … It looked like little fangs 🙂
Hah! What a letdown, to expect some powerful help and find out you get snails. Too funny!
Vampire snails are powerful ones 🙂
The twist with snails … who could have thought of that? 😀
Funny twist with the snails, comical in the end 😀 …I wrote and posted a vampire story once and was able to scare a few … lol!
Great stuff 🙂
Thank you 🙂 I wonder if I can make a new installement on that one. But it looked like little fangs on that snail.
lol @ Fangs on the snail… OK I guess they cloud be mistaken for fangs once we’ve gotten into the gist of the story 🙂
Check out my piece on a vampire 🙂 : http://festivalking.wordpress.com/2012/11/06/an-untitled-dream-work/
Cheers
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