I get carried away
‘cross the almost
mirror-like surface.
paddling through water
like cutting butter
with a warm knife
my goal is no-goal
of no matter
soul purpose is
just to be
here
Entry for trifecta challenge. 33 words first person narrative.
March 2, 2013

Beautiful. The words and the picture.
Great word images. The line “like cutting butter…” meshes with the sense of being one with the water and the moment.
Lovely. How cool to see you at Trifecta. Maybe you’ve entered before, but it’s been awhile. This is beautiful.
Never did a trifecta before. 🙂 great fun this time.
Nice, B!
“soul purpose” beautiful turn of phrase – gorgeous photo, also.
Have to admitt it was a misspelling that made the entry so much better.
This seemed straight out of heart … well done !!!
Totally zen. Being, not getting there. Nice one.
Thank you 🙂
I liked your description of paddling and connecting through the surface & to the soul. great photo too.
Like a dream,loved it!
my goal is no goal. Sigh.
Abso-freakin-lutely! My wife and I have this debate all of the time: she is the queen of the multi-taskers, whereas I have no trouble with the notion of slowing down once and awhile and just being at peace with my world. “My goal is no goal” is a great motto in this hectic world of ours. You seem so at peace. I am envious of you, for sure. 🙂
This is far from my normal life. But once you are out the goal of having no goal is often the best. And without a breeze you just glide through the water.
Bring one with nature, the calmness of the water..alone in thought , just paddling, such a perfect picture painted Brudberg.
Absolutely lovely!
That is excellent.
This is lovely! It’s such a peaceful piece.
When heaven choose/ to reflect & play a while here/ one’s moments stay transfixed in time.
So true 🙂