Carpe Diem Haiku – Chiyo-Ni Dewdrops

Carpe Diem today has a Haiku by Chiyo-Ni haiku:


the dew of the rouge flower
when it is spilled
is simply water


I choose to see a theme of lent beauty here, and rouge I read as red, Picture is from Wikimedia Commons

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blood droplets
dewdrops on the rose
just water spilled
~~
stolen pride
dew drops on the petals
absorbed in soil
~~
flower gems
ruby water droplets
evaporates



February 21, 2013

17 responses to “Carpe Diem Haiku – Chiyo-Ni Dewdrops

  1. The first one really reaches deep – and the ‘gem’ idea is very nice. I too looked at the idea of evaporation but in the end gave up and went cross country skiing and wrote a similar haiku based on what I saw! Nice presentation again my friend..

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