25 responses to “Carpe Diem Haiku – Chiyo-ni special, flower scent”

1. You are in romance mode! Sensual and haunting at once! And a reminder how powerful scent is as a trigger for memory! Bravo!

   • Thank you. Got me thinking about the world of willow and flowers (the world of the geisha)

2. very nice and romantic set Bjorn. Awesome as you have caught the essence of the haiku by Chiyo-ni. That second haiku is for sure my favorite. Thank you for your daily effort to write haiku and share them with Carpe Diem.

   • Thank you, a very vivid image indeed.

3. that is a beautiful prompt – and I enjoyed your interpretations

   • Thank you Bill 🙂

4. to lover left for war — *faints* i love the romance of it all

   • ah a little swooning is always good

5. Your haiku are always so full of peace … loved it !!

   • Thank you 🙂

6. Immediately I thought of a Zen-like inner landscape veiled in blossom! Lovely!

   • Oh, even beyond my intentions. Very nice.

7. Very, very good Bjorn…Bravo 🙂

   • Thank you, I recon you are back then. Look forward to your haiku.

8. I find these pieces to be tender reflections of what could be bittersweet experiences.

   Crushing One Blossom

9. Another lovely photo and your haiku are very well crafted in Chiyo style ~ Carol of (A Creative Harbor) ^_^ on Blogger

10. Mark has expressed my feelings.
    There is an ache of longing in these haiku.
    Cheers!
    JzB

11. There is an ache of longing in these hailu.
    JzB

    • Haiku.
      Bad typing
      JzB

12. how can you depict longing and loss so beautifully? well done!

    • Thank you, I thought I saw it in Chiyo-ni.s original haiku

13. This is so beautiful! longing, pining love, mesmerising!

    • Thank you, I wanted to have a dark undertone there as well…

14. Hmm, Sensual 🙂

15. I love the hypnotic notes of your haiku… All quite heady. 🙂
    Eliz

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