Carpe Diem Haiku – Shiki Special, evening sun

Today Carpe Diem has two haiku by Shiki as inspiration.


the evening sun
filters through the undergrowth
onto the hanging bed
~ and ~
the thunderstorm having cleared up
the evening sun shines on a tree
where a cicada is chirping


Just a couple of weeks ago during our vacation in Florida my wife and I admired this sunset at a beachside restaurant.

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for evening sun
breeze plays melody with
leaves of palm tree
~~
cicada greets
the evening setting sun
deep in undergrowth
~~
shining through the leaves
fire of nocturnal sun
onto my hammock



January 28, 2013

37 responses to “Carpe Diem Haiku – Shiki Special, evening sun

  1. Out of the three I loved the first haiku the best. Beautiful job with them and looking at that pic, I am so jealous of the people in Florida right now. Living in the frigid North East I feel as if I may never see the outside world look warm and inviting ever again.

  2. I think my earlier comment is in your spam(the one from my phone) I came back to look at your photo! It’s wonderful! Hope it was warm in Fla. for you!

  3. nice set …. espec. like the last – there’s the ‘fire of nocturnal sun’ and then there’s you – in your hammock just digging it all…

  4. Beautiful scenery in that photo … really a nice set of haiku inspired on the ones I gave by Shiki. Thank you Bjorn for your daily effort to share haiku with us.

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