Carpe Diem Haiku – Blues

Carpe Diem haiku is prompt today blues, which to me goes back to the shameful roots of slavery.

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crying instruments
voices of slaves speaks to me
melancholy soothes
~~
wailing blues guitar
pain of captured slaves in chains
speaking to my heart



January 13, 2013

13 responses to “Carpe Diem Haiku – Blues

  1. Good job of connecting the blues to their origins.
    Change “voice of slaves speaks to me” to “voices of slaves speak to me” and you’ve got seven syllables. (Hope you don’t mind me suggesting it.)

    janet

    • Good suggestion, though I’m less concerned about the syllables than the general rhythm, your suggestion improves the rhythm and the grammar. – Thank you

  2. WOW! This is really a nice set of haiku with the strong message that slavery is forbidden … the blues are rooted in that time, the tears and the hearth breaking life of slaves you can here in the blues.
    Thank you for sahring this with us Bjorn.

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