Carpe Diem Haiku – fire


sunset fire
nocturnal dancing
blackbird tune
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blackbird tune
light internal fire
take my hand
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take my hand
velvet night embrace
fire of love

First of all my apologies for not having the time to read and comment all the wonderful entries on Carpe Diem Haiku. I am currently out travelling. Picture I had to take from Wikimedia Commons
November 15, 2012

12 responses to “Carpe Diem Haiku – fire

  1. Oh, this is beautiful. I’ve been saying that a lot on this particular day, but there’s just so many wonderfully amazing talented poets out there and it’s such a pleasure to be following your blog.. I can just picture two lovers dancing around a bonfire.. Clearly, I am seeing stars and the glow of that full moon.. “Velvet night embrace,” That’s my favorite line, how could you not appreciate the beauty of the darkness of night.. This is beautiful.. very beautiful.

  2. Nature and passion shine wonderfully in your haiku together with the bird’s song. Very well written, powerful image.
    A pleasure reading you.
    Enjoy the weekend.
    🙂

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