winter day silence
bright sunlight lacking warmth
squeak of my footstep
~~
squeak of my footstep
painfully in silence scream
stop in chilly air
~~
stop in chilly air
enjoy the sound of silence
aching in my ears
Haiku for Haiku Heights. silence. I associate silent with winter, a clear day without wind, the sound of your footsteps in snow is the only thing you hear.
November 10, 2012

winter is silent– you crafted it well.
Thank you 🙂
Very nice chain you have here
Thank you 🙂
Lovely winter haiku ~ I like the aching sound of silence ~
If it’s too silent it aches. Thank you
The last verse resonates with me. The contrast of aching and joy! Well done.
Thank you for sharing that thought.
Now that – is a proper haiku.
Thank you, wonderful word silence.
The image you picked to go with it is great too – alone with silence.
Thank you, winter is silence for me
We’re heading into summer…
very well crafted, one of the great compositions I have read recently!
Thank you so much
A wonderful cascade
Thank you
aloha Brudberg – i like the practice of using the last line of one haiku as the first of another. it makes for a great round robin group.
i particularly like these two lines “squeak of my footstep” and “enjoy the sound of silence” cool. aloha.
I really like that style to. A little bit like making renga on your own.
Not everyone enjoys silence as much as the poet in your little whirl does!
Deep Desert Silence
Deep Desert Silence
Silence can be both a bliss and a curse.
me like…me like 🙂
Thank you 🙂
winter day silence …
unsurpassable
Winter and silence are twins in my mind.
Three stunners!
Thank you 🙂