Reworked my second sestina.. I think it’s better now.

Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatarBjörn Rudbergs writings

This is my second try in doing a sestina. It takes time, and I have now reworked it a little bit. Instead of trying to find words, I used a selection of WOTD from #ohj a wordgame on twitter. I tried to keep it pentameter, but there are a few stumbling points. The idea behind it is to describe the prize we pay in a competitive world. Picture comes from wikimedia commons.
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Today I almost reached a climax high
But had to act in ways that no one like
To win in games you have to claim the spot
Necessity in triumph of the prize
I wanted to be first and plant the flag
Be brutal, use authority and weight

It never mattered, victims of my weight
If anyone was hurt, who’s fall was high
The win’s still valid with a bloodstained flag
But moral sacrifice, I very…

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