September Heights Haiku – Birth

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Mountain ice melting
River birth in summer sun
Thundering rapids

Haiku for Haiku Heights birth
September 21, 2012

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8 responses to “September Heights Haiku – Birth”

  1. This one is especially vivid! It has your touch, clearly, but also feels–I am not quite sure if “traditional” is the right word, but close… venerable? not exactly. But … as though it sprung from the land itself, melted away, became part of the torrent….

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