September Heights Haiku – Birth

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Mountain ice melting
River birth in summer sun
Thundering rapids

Haiku for Haiku Heights birth
September 21, 2012

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8 responses to “September Heights Haiku – Birth

  1. This one is especially vivid! It has your touch, clearly, but also feels–I am not quite sure if “traditional” is the right word, but close… venerable? not exactly. But … as though it sprung from the land itself, melted away, became part of the torrent….

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