30 responses to “September Heights Haiku – Lights”

1. I love that line – I carry sunshine inside 🙂

   • That’s were the sunshine belong

2. Love this haiku, so romanic. And I, too, like the line “I carry sunshine inside”

   • The inside sunshine is even more important than the other

3. Lovely! I my humble opinion, the last line is not required at all.

   • It depends on the company

4. Love is a strong emotion – it can set fire to almost anything!

   • 🙂

5. Love is certainly a motivation to venture out. Nicely Bjorn!

   Hank

   • A great company motivates adventures

6. beautiful and romantic

   • Thank you.. romance also when all seems dark

7. Great one! I like the second line very much.

   • Many thanks

8. a hopeful and awesome write.

   • Thank you

9. I like this. It’s so atmospheric! Gloaming is a great word.

   • Gloaming is a real favorite of mine as well.

10. Into the gloaming he goes, glowing…

    Three Lights

    • gloaming and glowing are great pairs in words 🙂

11. writing is magical, haiku is wonderful to tackle.

    love your take. smiles.

    check out poets rally today, a random poem or a haiku is okay to take.

    cheers.
    smiles.

12. So few lines that say so much, and I love the photo, Bjorn xx

    • Thank you very much.. 🙂 I think that one was my fav of my haiku height challenge 🙂

13. Beautiful!! Your words warmed my heart this morning. Thank you, Sir.

    • Thank you 🙂

14. Wonderful, and I see my sweet wife has been here before me!

    • Sometimes haiku with picture (or haiga) is the best way to condense your thoughts down to as little as possible,

      • My mathematician friend, who studies Japan and the Japanese language, has been, of late, filling me in regarding the forms of poetry and art they employ there. It is very fascinating.

      • I follow a daily haiku-meme called carpe diem. And I feel my grasp of haiku has increased a lot since I started.

      • I enjoy reading yours. And writing them. And… I once again find myself very busy…. But I will manage to find time for all I wish to read–and write. My dear wife misses my stories, which I have lately been neglected. But I am beginning to see that i have much more time for them than I realised.

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