Outside
A happy smile
I meet you every day
And talking unimportant things
Avoid what should be said
About us two
Inside
I feel the dread
That nothing is beyond
A daily pleasant lunch with you
Where is my courage now
To show my love
Outside
—
Inspired by iambic cinnquain. ¨
1-2-3-4-3-2-1-2-3-4-3-2-1
July 2, 2011
You have a gift for expressing things that, that no doubt, most of us have felt inside–and outside.
I got that comment before. First of all it is an interesting contrast, and secondly it makes interesting poetry.