More Gold than Silver

As days are getting shorter and summer has aged to a middle aged woman, nights are coming back and I will go to bed in darkness. I will be able to see again the moon spilling its silver in the lake, and though I know it cannot be sieved and turned into profit I will still treasure the return of such celestial richness.

ripened the wheatfield —
golden waves undulating
for the yawning wind

Summer Evening, Wheatfield with Setting sun
Vincent van Gogh

Today I return to blogging after being absent for a month. Frank hosts the haibun Monday at dVera with the word being silver.

August 4, 2025

28 responses to “More Gold than Silver

  1. Welcome back, Björn! I love the idea that ‘summer has aged to a middle aged woman’. I’ve noticed the darker nights, the conkers on the horse chestnut, and orange leaves on our cherry tree. How lovely to see ’the moon spilling its silver’ again. I love the haiku, especially ‘the yawning wind’.

  2. Hey there, Björn. I am also looking forward to the fall, but from down here in the red rock deserts of the United States, I have a far longer wait. I loved what you wrote, and the ability to look at lakes in the moonlight. Thank you for your fine poem.

  3. I love these lines!

    though I know it cannot be sieved and turned into profit I will still treasure the return of such celestial richness.

  4. Welcome back! Days are getting shorter and I am happy you will once again be able to see the silver moon in her glory.

  5. Björn, this has such a gentle dusk-to-dawn feel. I really like how you framed the moonlight as celestial richness—that’s exactly how it feels sometimes.

    ~David

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