Serpent tongues ensnared
with skin on skin in sun
on silver sand and salt,
exploring sunburned legs
while muscles toned to sin
bless our itch of lust,
as we climax lulled by surf
exposed for skies to see.
Today Melissa hosts dVerse with a prompt on some selected images by Pablo Picasso with a common theme of women at the beach.
June 3, 2025

A very vivid poem, Bjorn
🍑🍆
oh man that’s one erotic looking painting
i chose the same one to write my poem
much♡love
It was what I thought as well
I like your use of the s sound. Sizzling! The legs do look sunburnt now that you mention it.
Some sibilance makes it sexy
I like your interpretation of the painting more than mine. I used the same painting, and came up with something dark. There is a fleshy quality to it.
It looked quite meaty 🍖 to me
Well done..both by the sun and by your pen.
That is some kind of naked, Bjorn. Couldn’t be more satisfying.
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I think you captured the feel of the painting, it is very sensual and erotic.
I really love how you said it,not bad at all.
BRAVO 👏
🍑🍆 indeed!!! Very nicely done!
That one left me a bit bothered. 🥵😉
You know that “Get a room?” taunt ~~ one might yell “Get a tent” to your sunbathers! LOL Seriously, this is a great response to the prompt.
Very nicely done. You gave the painting “a run for its money!” It is interesting that in all the poems written about this one, no one that I read seems to have addressed the stone monument in the background! ?
NOW i understand this painting, Bjorn… Somebody is definitely gonna get sunburned!
That’s exactly what I saw in that painting! Lol! Great poem, Bjorn!
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It took a brave person to tackle that one…and to make it sizzle! I could not make head or tail of it. Great alteration, and a challenge to find the sensuality — you did…I think Picasso must have been looking for that too.
You redeemed the abstraction Bjorn, oooh!