Sugarcoating

Engraved,
in mind
the dire dreams
of dirge and dread,

awake
at three AM
slick with sweat
with bedsheets coiled
around my legs

I realize, alas,
that nightmares
really sugarcoat reality
where crooning drones
await
to crack my ribcage
and rip my heart away.

Nighmares are just sugarcoated version of reality – AI image by Chat-GPT

Kim hosts dVerse Quadrille were the word today is engrave.

March, 24 2025

29 responses to “Sugarcoating

  1. I like the contrast of ‘sugarcoating’ and ‘engraved’, Björn, and the very effective alliterative phrase ‘dire dreams of dirge and dread’, and what a dramatic ending!

  2. Dang, Bjorn, if your usual nightmares are sugarcoated, reality is what level of hel (e.g. walking in the icy cold with wet feet) that you exist in? Fear is a great vampire isn’t it.

  3. I realize, alas,
    that nightmares
    really sugarcoat reality

    Was going to swear…but yes, bang! you just delivered your darkest words yet..or ever…expect to see those wors quoted somewhere one day…good use of the drone…really though, those words will stick….no pun wanted…

      • Think after the cable cutting by Russia, and actually of war, that Sweden is in the front lines though. It can be seen that the Russians are building a lot of military infrastructure in Leningrad Oblast, plus huge air force base in Murmansk. I know one scenario is they gain a hold up in Finnmark/Northern Sweden/Finland. Lots of Russians bought properties in northern Norway. A LOT.. Can:t help thinking this would be a nightmare for NATO…or what is left of it with Trump…

  4. “the dire dreams
    of dirge and dread”
    … oh hey, just not fair to live it in real life and then to have to dream about it too. make it stop!

  5. Those dreams at 3:00 am can be dark and unsettling.

    the dire dreams
    of dirge and dread,

    I have had dreams like those….and I try to forget them but, sometimes they are the ones that linger and haunt

  6. Nightmares sugar coating reality … which for me usually has a way of seeping through …. great quadrille, Bjorn.

  7. Reminded me of those hard sugar/egg white easter eggs of old, they were sugar coated and you could engrave them 🙂 what a horror dream. Noting too, the use of drone in its original sense.

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