… and then we danced, without a thought
embracing a solitude brought
beneath the empyrean sky
all alone and entwined as trees
in moonlight and sunshine set free
to survey with sensitive eyes
alloy to one, being of two
now together alone we’re glued
forever each other untied.
Today Grace hosts dVerse with a form new to me, the Nove Otto which is a 9 line 8 syllable poem with rhymescheme aacbbcddc.
November 28, 2024
Björn Rudbergs writings 
I love the art you chose to go along with this. It adds another beautiful layer to your poem.❤️
Thank you… I remember years ago when we had Rodin as a Poetic prompt.
Poem complements the image so well. Love the title, and the unity with entwined as trees.
Thank you… the title was a late addition.
You aced the form, Björn, and I love the image of a couple dancing ‘entwined as trees in moonlight’.
Nice one Björn
much♡love
Very enjoyable, Bjorn.
How gorgeous. I am absolutely in love with this
I love the romantic imagery and serene tone! ‘Forever each other untied’ is such a profound and touching line. Beautifully written! 🌟
A romantic poem with perfect image.
A lovely poem, very passionate 🌈
I guess the image inspired your words. It’s perfect.