Suite for strings

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Fusing heart with heart
in harmony
our strings so strange
forms symphonies
of sympathy
and grows by
intertwining mind to mind
in scintillating flames
of adoration,
to forge a common cause
and save
both soil and sea
from mutual ignorance
of artificial
untuned instruments.

Violins
Arman

Today Lisa hosts dVerse Quadrille, with the word string. You can use it in any form and include it in your poem of exactly 44 words.

September 30, 2024

17 responses to “Suite for strings”

  1. I enjoyed your suite for strings, Björn, especially the idea of ‘fusing heart with heart in harmony’. But oh, those ‘artificial untuned instruments’, we can do without them!

  10. Great title and indeed “our strings so strange” That artwork goes perfect with your poem. I love the guitars that seem to be taking shape yet, are unstrung. Perhaps, we as a society have broken too many strings that hold us together.

  12. Love the alliteration that flows so smoothly and may “soil and sea
    from mutual ignorance
    of artificial
    untuned instruments” be saved by hearts “fused in harmony”.

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