In this tan renga my task is to complete the haiku by Georgia:
early morning
silence before the rising sun
raindrops on a branch
My choice is to do it with some additional imagery of dawn.
early morning
silence before the rising sun
raindrops on a branch
bejeweled coronation
as sleepy thrushes quarrel

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November 7, 2014
Awesome continuation Björn … i like the idea of dawn …
Yes, they do that! It can well be a raucous start to the morning. Great lines Bjorn!
Hank
I really like this one! Can see and hear the birds — waking me up too early.
Squawking birds…good image !
Perfect completion!
I love this imagery…and I can hear them fussing too!
Bjorn, The birds are really active first thing in the morning. Well written. 🙂 — Suzanne
i like this a lot, the juxtaposition of raindrops and the jeweled coronation, goes really well
much love…
A delight to read, Bjorn!!
ha smiles… i love the quarelling thrushes… they ground this so wonderfully in reality
Value added. Commendable.
Oh … I really like this conclusion with a !coronation
Lovely….a beautiful chirpy sunrise! 🙂