the solemn hymn –
when the steady breeze plays
a pine-forest
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October 13, 2014
Björn Rudbergs writings
Poetry and fiction by a physicist from the dark side
the solemn hymn –
when the steady breeze plays
a pine-forest
Linked to Carpe Diem
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October 13, 2014
Writing about living in two places (and times)
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Björn Rudbergs writings 
Lovely!
Your haiku captures the sound of wind through pines wonderfully. My current house is beneath pine trees and I’ve been trying to think up a haiku about the sounds the wind makes since I moved in. You are right – it is a very solemn hymn.
A beauty!
mmm listen to the hymn of that forest
it will not lead you
astray
a wonderful imagery to feast on! ahhh! 😀
Bjorn, I love the part, “a steady breeze plays a pine forest.” Lovely. 🙂 —Susan
There’s no cathedral quite like a pine forest when the music is playing!
I’ve been in a pine forest and your poem brought back the memory of the sound of wind carrying through the trees.
a beautiful symphony!
the hymn of breezes in a pine forest – glorious.
a fantastic orchestra … and what a concert!
Solid, yet beautiful and moving image as the breeze comes along…