highest branch –
where all the apples
gather
patiently waiting
outside the Apple-store –
new iPhone

Linked to Carpe Diem
—
September 24, 2014
highest branch –
where all the apples
gather
patiently waiting
outside the Apple-store –
new iPhone

Linked to Carpe Diem
—
September 24, 2014
Writing about living in two places (and times)
Poems & Stories from The Author Stew
practising for a whole life
haikai poetry matters
Running in the slow lane
The view from here ... Or here!
“Life is like riding a bicycle. To keep your balance, you must keep moving.” — Albert Einstein
chronicling my quarter life crisis
With all the uproar over the new iPhone 6, your haiku is timely!
fruitless search for apples
Bjorn, Well written about both kinds of apples. 🙂 —Susan
highest branch –
where all the apples
gather
falling from such heights
worm feasts on bruises
perfect tan renga…
on the knowledge tree
we have apples and apples
both kinds with bugs
cheers!
JzB
Oh I love the humor of your haiku ~ Fantastic! ~ So creative!
artmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor)
How true to both, and some good responses!
Very amusing Haiku. Enjoyable.
Oh my … a modern tool in haiku … awesome …
lol .. lovely! And a bright red MckIntosh (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/McIntosh_%28apple%29) for you! 😀
Humor to brighten my morning! Have you seen the new phones…
their is a commercial where two cell phones are ‘talking’ to each other.
And one can only remember when it was the only phone that could talk.
I just want a phone so I can talk… but even my ‘flip-phone’ has more features than I know what to do with. 😉
My Geek is not a fan of ‘Apple’, though he does enjoy the fruit 🙂
I use the phone for all kind of thiings.. just like I use my computer also to talk… I am neither fan or not a fan of apple.. I just use them 🙂
Almost reminds me of the show ‘My Mother the Car’ – a short lived comedy I think. But the gent used his car, but his mother’s voice came through the radio…
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/My_Mother_the_Car
We use the technology we have. Or not. 🙂
IKEA-parody on Apple
Excellent! Funny too. Thanks.
Very impressive…
Got your iPhone? 🙂