A missed Connection

Here is our latest collaborative poem – by coincidence it’s a Rubayiat — and it will be linked to dVerse MTB tonight at 9 PM CET.. where we are doing Rubayiat .. hmm

Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatarThe voice of collaborative poetry

TRAIN2

Phone in my hand, I wait for the train.
My eyes keep flicking to scan it again.
Absent is the text you promised you’d send.
The subtext appears: my future holds pain.

The stars in the sky to your eyes would lend
A sparkle, a sheen, to fidelity bend
I tremble with fear, it’s breaking my heart
The bile in my throat – could this be the end?

Accursed be a love, once riven apart,
A ship on the seas, beyond any chart.
I’d sacrifice, kill, if I could return
To when we first met, that hope-laden start.

A time when our love did recklessly burn
Weightless, but solid, no mortal could turn
Together our beings and bodies as one
unshakable union no one could spurn

We were a knot that could not be undone,
A speeding car that could not be outrun,
My romantic fantasy rendered me blind
I…

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5 responses to “A missed Connection

  1. nice…great story telling through form…i like the play with the text/subtext in the beginning stanza…ouch….relationships change fast…and this carries the sting of the realization it is over…

  2. A wry, tongue-in-cheek parody, of sorts, to “A Book of Verses underneath the Bough, A Jug of Wine, a Loaf of Bread–and Thou.” Your title is Perfect! Very clever.

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