Jim’s haiku:
city morning
a crane lifts its shadow
up the wall
makes me respond with an American Sentence:
A clerk wakes up to jackhammer staccato, silencing the songbirds
Linked to Carpe Diem
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August 22, 2014
Jim’s haiku:
city morning
a crane lifts its shadow
up the wall
makes me respond with an American Sentence:
A clerk wakes up to jackhammer staccato, silencing the songbirds
Linked to Carpe Diem
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August 22, 2014
Writing about living in two places (and times)
Poems & Stories from The Author Stew
practising for a whole life
haikai poetry matters
Running in the slow lane
The view from here ... Or here!
“Life is like riding a bicycle. To keep your balance, you must keep moving.” — Albert Einstein
chronicling my quarter life crisis
perfect
JzB
Awesome American Sentence … i am beginning to like that form.
I think it takes some time to get used to..
That’s true …
That really is a masterpiece of genre Bjorn
Ah perfect, it was the word I could not remember!! Jackhammer to wake up my city dweller..I really like that sentence!!
Bjorn, Well-written American sentence. That’s likely to happen in a city. 🙂 —Susan
I’ll take the birds over jackhammers any day!
San Miguel Morning
every place has its own music
sometimes
it is a jackhammer…ha