Magical Mystical Teacher wrote the wonderful haiku:
how rare the sight—
yellow blossoms brushing
the sky with light
To transform this into a tanka, I add my own two lines.
how rare the sight—
yellow blossoms brushing
the sky with light
my eyes touch the horizon
travelling the rapeseed sea
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August 15, 2014
Björn Rudbergs writings 
Wow! Björn this is a stunning continuation of this wonderful Tan Renga started by MMT … thank you!
Thank you Kristjaan.. as you know rapeseed would be an excellent early summer kigo.. it talks early summer to me more than most words.
You’re right … you have brought a new idea in my mind. I think i am going to explore that idea a bit more … thanks for the inspiration …
Bjorn, Lovely addition. 🙂 —Susan
What a beautiful continuation, Bjorn! and so original.
i like the continuation Björn ! i can feel the travelling eyes !
Great completion 🙂