Jack Kerouac wrote:
playing basketball
– the lady next door
watching again
And I respond with an American Sentence
Toothless gaffer watches his sunbathing neighbor when sprinklers go off.

Itty-Bitty Bikini by Marjorie Strider
Linked to Carpe Diem
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May 21, 2014
A nice American Sentence Björn… very much in the same tone, sense and spirit as Kerouac’s
Oh, what a rude awakening — ice-cold water on an almost-burned back!
Great poem Björn 🙂
harmless, but not by choice 🙂
Bjorn, That would be a shock; a rude awakening you might say. 🙂 —Susan
Ha, indeed.. 😉
Hilarious I should say!
excellent!
Darn sprinklers! 😉
Whiffs of Kerouac
Very funny.