This bad-ass double crossing type
six-shooter mercy-less assault
it fueled this trigger easy snipe
I guess it caged his list of faults
From Wikimedia commons
This week I tried to make the wordle so compact I absolutely could, while keeping a tetrameter rhyme… hope it makes some sense with my little play.
Linked to the Sunday Whirl
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March 3, 2014
Björn Rudbergs writings 
tight little wordle…a little sprinkle of Glenn’s westerns in there as well…ouch on the 6 shooter full of our faults…that would whittle you down pretty good…
Fast flying bullet words..love it!
very nice. I liked reading it…light and kind of fun
…and compact it was! Very effective though.
Well done!!!
Compact, yes! Short and sweet! Wonderful write Bjorn!
Hank
Merciless assault—I like the snappy write ~
Full of faults as he shines away. Short but loaded, nice!
I love a good shoot ’em up!
Ah! six-shooter! ~ sharply loaded poem, Bjorn!
Bjorn, I love concise wordles, as I cannot seem to write one myself.
Pamela
I love it when you are brief–this just so works for me
I am never disappointed when I visit your poems! This one surprised and brought me a smile. Bad-assed, indeed! 🙂
I also occasionally try to be compact with the wordles, and really enjoy it when I succeed. Congratulations.
Elizabeth
http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/
This bad-ass dude is not one I would want to meet anytime soon! 😉
Good one, Bjorn. Ah yes, the Old West. My dad was an arm-chair cowboy.
This one is a tightly packed assault indeed.