Shiko:s wonderful haiku
kusakago wo oite hitonashi haru no yama
a basket of grass,
and no one there, –
mountains of spring
to revise it proved impossible. I wrote on inspired instead.
when moss grows
on rusty machinery –
forest wins
Linked to Carpe Diem
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January 3, 2013

even machines
slowly must travel
the cycle of life
Very true.. finally even the stongest engine fall victim to rust.
nature has its way
def a small victory….
Love your take Björn! We probably many more such forest victories.
Just a matter of time before nature takes its course! Nicely Bjorn!
Hank
beautiful. especially when pared with the picture
love it. I like yours better.
Hey very clever!
Awesome Bjorn … you’ve struggled with this challenge I understood from your comment … but your struggle has given us a wonderful haiku.
I love to use this one in one of our upcoming Tan Renga Challenges …
Of course you can use it
Thank you Bjorn …
Reverting to nature 🙂
And it will always win over the abandoned things. Well-pictured. 🙂
That’s pretty cool, Bjorn!
Taking it to another level!
I also wrote an inspiration and I think Kristjaan’s was more inspiration than revision, too. This one was tough. You did well.
The title, the photo, the words – a perfect trifecta.
Nicely done.
I love the photo. Did you take it?
oh I like how you were inspired Bjorn. Sorry I have been absent for the past month or more. Have missed the community of writers. Happy New Year