Using the inspirational haiku by haiku by Hando:
on the Snowmass slope
even the magpies on the fence
sit in silence
This is what I came up with.
falling silence
snowflakes on black feathers
as daylight wanes
Linked to Carpe Diem
December 15, 2013

A general look at waning through specific images – terrific.
well composed haiku ~ lovely ~ thanks, carol, xxx
Falling silence….I know of this :smiles.
Lovely image
Can fall and melt away, that works for my bay.
Beautiful!
Another well crafted poem, beautiful!
Observant words put me there.
Beautiful
I like the contrasts in this piece!
Daily Quietude
You had me with ‘falling silence.’ Lovely !
that’s today’s forecast – gentle snowfall at sunset…
What a gorgeous response on Hando’s haiku Bjorn … really a little gem or shall I say a masterpiece … 🙂