Buson’s haiku shall now be revised…
a hand-ball,
wet with the spring rain falling
on the roof
Per the article there should be a certain meaninglessness in this..
old teddy bear
soaked in autumn rain –
left high and dry
Picture from Wikimedia Commons
Linked to Carpe Diem
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November 29, 2013
Writing about living in two places (and times)
Poems & Stories from The Author Stew
practising for a whole life
haikai poetry matters
Running in the slow lane
The view from here ... Or here!
“Life is like riding a bicycle. To keep your balance, you must keep moving.” — Albert Einstein
chronicling my quarter life crisis
Björn Rudbergs writings 
A beauty Björn… a complete different haiku this has become. Good one … 🙂
Ah, but I like it!
delightfully cute revision ☺