oh, sweet October…
spare thy frost on yonder grapes
our sweet summer wine (Opie Houston)
warms us in the winter’s cold
togetherness in ember’s glow (Björn)

Interior of a Farm with Figures at the Fireside by Vincent van Gogh
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I couldn’t help but make this a little bit iambic in the concluding stanzas. Tying this back a little to Frost’s poem.
Shared with Carpe Diem
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November 25, 2013
Perfect print for a perfect poem.
Wonderful.
love the last line..the warmth of ember’s glow ..very nice
Outstanding, Bjorn!
Awesome Björn… what a beautiful romantic continuation of this Tan Renga. I like the Van Gogh … perfectly chosen to go along with this poem.
Lovely. Great flow and I love the sentiment.
Bravo!
Beautiful completion, Bjorn. Mine is similar!
It’s the togetherness that furnishes the most warmth.
Oh, Sweet October
Great write Bjorn! Good balance of hot and cold.
Hank
Yes sir! Lovely images in your words!
Good one Bjorn! I enjoyed that last stanza!
what a lovely moment by the fire – warm the heart.