crossing the footbridge
a sound that comes unbidden …
my wild beating heart Lolly
when confronted with a doe
it syncopates her fear Björn
Head of a young doe, by Gustave Courbet
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Carpe Diem Tan Renga – Lolly’s ”crossing the footbridge”
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Björn Rudbergs writings 
Oh… that is wonderfully completed. 🙂
I like this, Bjorn!
Syncopates! Great link to the haiku!!
Syncopates… great word. Nice completion. As we have come to expect.
I can hear that poor doe’s heart thudding—syncopating—wildly!
…syncopates her fear ~ lovely doe ~ great completion to the mood. ~ carol, xxx
clever! I love!
great lines…
Nice completion, Bjorn!
Clever but sweet … a doe is such a sweet image.
fine ending especially the second line.
A great second stanza … nice imagery ….