by the shore
discarded lovers
broken shells (JRB)
beaten by the waves
eroded into sand (Björn)
Shell Beach at Shinnecock by William Merritt Chase
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November 8, 2013
Carpe Diem Tan Renga – JRB”s ”By the shore”
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November 8, 2013
Björn Rudbergs writings 
A melancholic image well captured. 🙂
Great addition.
It is hard to imagine the eons and eons it takes for that to occur! 🙂
luv the extension and the image goes well with it
much love
I liked ‘beaten by the waves’, there is a certain violence about love.
beaten, broken, eroded. shells of us all
A wonderful completion Bjorn, thank you 🙂
by the shore
beautifully expressed, Bjorn ♥
Poignantly beautiful 🙂
Very well composed 2nd stanza Bjorn … deepens the image of JRB’s starting verse.