Carpe Diem Haiku – Bamboo grass

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Complete a haiku by Basho

missing a wife
the bamboo grass dives under

hmmm .. not easy

Rock fish and bamboo grass

Rock fish and bamboo grass



missing a wife
the bamboo grass dives under –
an easy catch

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October 21, 2013

5 responses to “Carpe Diem Haiku – Bamboo grass”

  1. Awesome … you’ve used the kireji ‘ya’ in the original by Basho in a great way. Nice completion Bjorn … Basho would be proud and grateful as you had known eachother. Well done.

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