Carpe Diem prompt today is Japanese Spring. I make an effort in doing one-line haiku. Happy for feedback.

Mount Fuji seen throught cherry blossom by Katsushika Hokusai
As Fuji-san hides behind the bloom of spring sakura
August 22
Carpe Diem prompt today is Japanese Spring. I make an effort in doing one-line haiku. Happy for feedback.

Mount Fuji seen throught cherry blossom by Katsushika Hokusai
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I love this 🙂
Excellent. How do YOU like writing one line haiku? Did it feel weird at first?
Not really… I started with three lines to get a right rhythm, and then I see if I need to smooth it a little. … it was enjoyable.
If this is your first attempt at a one-liner, I’d say you did admirably well!
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I made a few efforts before… but never linked up before.
A Nice One-Line haiku Bjorn. Really well done. I personally am not a fan of the One-Line haiku, but so now and then I write a One-Line myself.
I’m still unsure.. but I really love the one-line haiku in a haibun (I actually think there it works better than the three-line)
Wow! I love it!
I think it works great. I see it. Nicely done.
Sweet and flirtatious.
Bravo…this is excellent Bjorn San.
Is it possible for Fuji-san to hide—or is it wishful thinking on the sacred mount’s part?
Spring
I think that at spring Fuji-San hides a little 🙂
Beautiful i absolutely love this! 🙂 Your fascination with Japan is doing us all good!
gorgeous, tastes like a true haiku – i have never done a 1-liner, now i want to try 🙂
I have tried one line haiku before. I find the challenge is to inject actual feeling into it.
You didn’t have a problem at all, Björn! So lovely.