Carpe Diem Haiku – Yuunagi (Evening lull),

Today In Carpe Diem the kigo is Yuunagi (Evening lull). So well chosen since I have a very nice evening on the balcony here. Tomorrow we have midsummer’s eve, which is a holiday and we have just shared a bottle of Champagne.

An Evening Lull
by Walt Whitman

After a week of physical anguish,
Unrest and pain, and feverish heat,
Toward the ending day a calm and lull comes on,
Three hours of peace and soothing rest of brain.

Part of our garden

Part of our garden


evening lull
at solstice end of week
rest my brain

rest my brain
birds bring evening lull
on my balcony

23 responses to “Carpe Diem Haiku – Yuunagi (Evening lull),

  1. Awwl, this is very good. Very good indeed and it makes me smile because I remember googling “evening lull” for any kind of photo or words–anything for inspiration and Whitman’s poem appeared.
    And he helped me out again, Mr. Whitman did. I pulled out the word “rest” and the rest is history.

  2. What a lovely image of part of your garden. I’ve been in the garden a lot today also tending to an apparently abandoned fledgling. So again we have similar haiku. Our lull is when the birds leave at sundown. Resting brain is lovely thought.

  3. Yes! The birds sound different in the evening! Like parents coaxing small children to sleep with a soft song! I enjoyed my(virtual) visit to your balcony(Nice wine too) Thank you !Evening Lull

  4. What a coincedence … as was preparing this episode I ran into the same poem, but I didn’t use it. Awesome to see that there are more participants who have used the poem by Whitman or were inspired by it. Nice set of haiku Bjorn. Thank you for sharing. BTW: I have looked at dVerse and read something more about sedoka, not really my kind of poetry, but I think I will try it sometimes.

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