20 responses to “Carpe Diem Haiku – Oborozuki (hazy moon)”

1. Nice twist at the end! That poor duck didn’t have a chance, he was so busy looking for his shadow!

2. I like ducks. This is sad.

3. very diverse set of haiku ~ like the essence of the 2nd one … wonderful photograph ~ Enjoy ^_^

4. Mallard ducks are so pretty. I love the imagery, ecxept for the poor crispy one!

5. Wonderful series of haiku Bjorn, that twist at the end I hadn’t expected. Well done. Thank you for sharing.

6. I like ducks
   on the other hand
   I like duck

   wonderful series.
   Cheers!
   JzB

7. Adore the first two 🙂 Poor duckie.

8. Ducks and moon – a perfect combo 🙂

9. Yumi, love duck. Nature is only beautiful when it is on your side.

10. I like the image of the mallards hunting their own shadows, but not so much the mallards being hunted!

    Hazy Moon

11. I love ducks, espec. crispy ones hanging in Chinese grocery stores..I could never kill one, though (such a hypocrite!)

12. love this sequence – the transitions are great, and the sense of wholeness is (curiously) in keeping with the themes. There is a deep respect in it as a piece which shines through. Poems, yes, but more than that, there is poetry.

    • Thank you.. there is a great group of people doing daily haiku here, and this month we are doing classical kigo of spring.

13. do you have something against ducks? yes, i know they’re tasty, but… anything eles? 😉

    • No I like ducks actually

14. Lovely imagery and beautiful set. The second one is a gem. And the last one…ouch. That gunshot went straight through my heart.

15. Oh gosh, giggling.

    • 🙂

16. wonderful haiku, cool ending!

17. Awesome…love the set.☺
    Peace
    Siggi

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